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The first time I saw you,
I knew I loved you.
The first time I looked into your eyes,
I knew I loved you.
The first time I heard you speak,
I knew I loved you.
The first time you kissed me,
I knew I loved you.
The first time you held me,
I knew I loved you.
The first time you told me you had to leave,
I still loved you.
When I saw one single tear run down your face as you walked away,
I knew you loved me.
©2004-2009 ~Gothikka
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*Sigh* he loves me...

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:iconbrokenbug:
Wow...this is a really sweet poem. Keep up the good work!
:icongothikka:
Thanks, I will. And thank you for the fav!

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"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet..."
:iconteh-lizard:
it doesn't end the way i thoguht it would.. but it is better that way.. it's kind of droneing but I still love it.. somethign shoudl be repeated.. Great job! :hug: :clap:

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Where am I going? And Why am I in this handbasket??
:icongothikka:
I know it's droning, and I'm sorry, but I just couldn't put it any other way. I'm glad you still like it though. :) I'm curious though, how did you think it would end?

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"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet..."
:iconteh-lizard:
I dunno.. I don;t think ahead when I read poetry and now I cant remember I should read ity again.

but Dont; apoligize for the droning
i wrote a poem like that it said I'm sorry every single line.. but I ended up changing it for the better.. Don;t change yours it is so great the way it is..
Sometimes the way you put it is the best way TO put it.

=D

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Where am I going? And Why am I in this handbasket??
:icongothikka:
lol well hopefully you'll remember. Thanks again

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"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet..."
:iconteh-lizard:
I will try to remember in fact I think I might be posting another one tonight.. Around 9:00 hopefulyl so keep an eye out!!!

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Where am I going? And Why am I in this handbasket??
:icongothikka:
ok I will!

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"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet..."

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